The structure of a flamenco is a quintain, five lines with the following number of syllables 6- 6- 5- 6- 6
Earth and Sun align
Our Earth and Sun align
An equinox of time
Changes nature's garb.
Earth's axil tilt of 23
Uniqueness in the line!
Sandy
ROADS WE TRAVEL AND DESTINATIONS REACHED
Time at home and away in Bugzy with Bess
The structure of a flamenco is a quintain, five lines with the following number of syllables 6- 6- 5- 6- 6
Earth and Sun align
Our Earth and Sun align
An equinox of time
Changes nature's garb.
Earth's axil tilt of 23
Uniqueness in the line!
Sandy
Never heard of a quintain. Interesting and effective. You must have done geography at school! You must put all your poems together in one place some time xx
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Oh, OK. I am really needing direction. I will ask Roy. Thank you!🙂
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I got so interested researching about the tilt of the earth and how it changed the world we live in I forgot to write about the beautiful seasonal changes!🤣🤣🤣
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Oh thank you for helping me.
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Astronomy in a poem — just my cup of tea!
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Ah that is what this is all about. I did the research knowing very little. Fell in love with the beauty of the facts and forgot about the colour. Thank you.
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Beautiful this little motion-loving poem!
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Thank you 😊 how kind of you.
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